I am by no means a major source for the subject, but here is my input: first off I LOVED how in depth you worked the naming process! Too many games just give you a single word with little but a base description and an image and you spend the whole game with every random person in game including the corner store clerk calling your mother "mom"! That was spot on! And we all love a compelling story that sucks you in and keeps you reading. But let's face it, anyone interested in the game are here for the lewd content.But too many games just give a quick story intro and ram the lew without bias! So having a long introduction to set up the meat of the story is great as long as there is a drop-off from story to include a healthy, yet controlled amount of lewd. You may have gone a little long on the story introductions. Even skipping past story content in a second play took like 20 minutes to see your first boob! But once you cut in, you ran the perfect amount to ensure both story and lewd were in perfect supply. My only MAJOR gripe, and the one that may damn your game is that the dialogue box is far too large and too bright and hinders view of the lewd content. Using H button to view content is fine for one off frame view and screenshotting. But having to use it for almost every scene is quite annoying. And very nearly enough for me to abandon all the great work you have laid thus far! This is my first peer review in this genre of gaming so i apologize if I did not follow any protocol or unspoken rule. But I feel complete and direct feedback is the only way for anyone to know what people do or do not like. I am only about an hour into the game. So my review is based on only a portion of the content I assume
honestly, it was more interesting than i expected, i even considered supporting, untill i get pissed of in process to looking for fucking bathroom!
need to cool down
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For now, the game follows a mostly linear path, but I plan to turn it into a sanbox game with turn-based combat and RPG mechanics.
eah i probably should read this one before. i am probably to old for endless looking for content in garbage sandboxes with poitless turn based combats.
Odd, I just tested it. Did you put patch into UndyingWill-0.02-pc\game folder? If you did it should work fine, if you start new game. I noticed some isssues though, if you load a game after putting the patch it may not work properly.
I understand that many sandbox VNs are essentially a grindfest, but my idea for one was to access a character's story with no requirements beyond completing the previous event. In the sandbox part, you could do repetitive things 'unlocked' in the storyline, such as petting a cat girl and so on.
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I am by no means a major source for the subject, but here is my input: first off I LOVED how in depth you worked the naming process! Too many games just give you a single word with little but a base description and an image and you spend the whole game with every random person in game including the corner store clerk calling your mother "mom"! That was spot on!
And we all love a compelling story that sucks you in and keeps you reading. But let's face it, anyone interested in the game are here for the lewd content.But too many games just give a quick story intro and ram the lew without bias! So having a long introduction to set up the meat of the story is great as long as there is a drop-off from story to include a healthy, yet controlled amount of lewd. You may have gone a little long on the story introductions. Even skipping past story content in a second play took like 20 minutes to see your first boob! But once you cut in, you ran the perfect amount to ensure both story and lewd were in perfect supply.
My only MAJOR gripe, and the one that may damn your game is that the dialogue box is far too large and too bright and hinders view of the lewd content. Using H button to view content is fine for one off frame view and screenshotting. But having to use it for almost every scene is quite annoying. And very nearly enough for me to abandon all the great work you have laid thus far!
This is my first peer review in this genre of gaming so i apologize if I did not follow any protocol or unspoken rule. But I feel complete and direct feedback is the only way for anyone to know what people do or do not like. I am only about an hour into the game. So my review is based on only a portion of the content I assume
I have improved this in the new update. Now you can set the opacity of the dialog box in the preferences tab.
honestly, it was more interesting than i expected, i even considered supporting, untill i get pissed of in process to looking for fucking bathroom!
need to cool down
edited:
For now, the game follows a mostly linear path, but I plan to turn it into a sanbox game with turn-based combat and RPG mechanics.
eah i probably should read this one before. i am probably to old for endless looking for content in garbage sandboxes with poitless turn based combats.
Gl with game and bye.
Well, if itch.io doesn't care about incest, here is the patch - https://mega.nz/file/E652FaRb#3mrtyql91UQqwf5hPXcVA_ERZLhdb8qXbWXBItWXJ8Q
doesnt working....:-)
Odd, I just tested it. Did you put patch into UndyingWill-0.02-pc\game folder? If you did it should work fine, if you start new game. I noticed some isssues though, if you load a game after putting the patch it may not work properly.
relation is set to nobody if u start new game with patch...
if u apply it after default names than that names stay even after patch.
dont see how this is working properly
I think I know where's the problem, give me a few minutes.
well?...
so, what is planned content? previouse game was with sweet incest tag, do we continue?
I do not know itch policy on that sort of thing so I'll answer with picture.
i think that they doesnt care much...btw u r on f95 again with this new project..
and thx for no anwer :-)
Not at the moment, but I plan to upload there tomorrow. Right now I have to go to bed.
it is already there.
Just wondering if you are gonna finish sheer happiness?
No, I'm sorry. I have no plans for that game. I have added some explanation at the end of Undying Will, and also on my Patreon.
probably should wonder if this one will be done to :D
That's the plan, but I don't know the future. If I won't be able to continue I'll get you know.
yeah...sorry if i dont trust u much on this, when u did no told us before :-)
I don't blame you. I can only apologize to you. I'm sorry.
nah we dont need apology (but thx anyway), we want game...but we will see in future where this one will go i gues
I find sandboxes frustrating I just want a good story and nice adult content.
I understand that many sandbox VNs are essentially a grindfest, but my idea for one was to access a character's story with no requirements beyond completing the previous event. In the sandbox part, you could do repetitive things 'unlocked' in the storyline, such as petting a cat girl and so on.
Although if the overall reception will be similar to yours, I might reconsider turning the game into a sandbox.
plz don't turn it into a sanbox game with turn-based combat and RPG mechanics.
Amen
Amen brother